Harry Stone
I like the layout of the contents page as the text and images are easy to read and see for the audience. The images have borders around them to split them from the text, which makes them stand out but also makes the text around easier to read for the audience. The headings for each page have been made a larger font size, underlined and made bold. This makes them eye catching to the audience, the audience will be attracted to the headings and encouraged to read the pages. The pages the audience will find the most interesting or the pages that the magazine wants to draw attention to have been labelled with a rugby ball. By doing this the audience's eye is drawn to that section and influenced to read the certain page. I think that the colour of the background could be improved; I am going to experiment with several colours so I can choose the best option that is most attractive to the audience. The 'issue number' and 'date of release' could also be made more attractive and vibrant.
Kiren Cottingham (Media student)
I like the background colour that has been chosen as it is effective as it makes the text and all of the images stand out and easy for the audience to view. The heading of the contents page is effective as it stands out and looks attractive. I think the use of the issue number is a waste of space as it could be displayed on the front cover and not the contents page as then the audience will want to be able to see what issue number without turning the page. Although the layout of the contents page is attractive, it is hard to follow the order in which the pages are because there is no set order.
Alex Mwanza (Media student)
I like the background of the contents page as it allows the text to stand out. This makes information for the audience easier to digest. The key image for the contents page is vibrant and attractive this is good as the audience is then influenced to look into the magazine. I like that the images have borders around each of them, I like how it makes them stand out to the audience. The headings are also made to stand out by them being bold and underlined. The rugby balls draw the audience's eye to the important pages which I admire about the magazine.
Alex Harrison (Media student)
The background blends too much to the title. The background being too dark may put a viewer off of the magazine. The boarders around the pictures are too bland, try to make them more interesting. Also there is a lack of on the magazine, not enough brings me in. I look more at the pictures than the text with this one so creating a bigger size font to make things stand out may be a good idea, as well as adding more information (To fill the blank spaces).
Good points- I like the lines between each content, and I like the header though it blends to much to the background.
The design overall is good but there is a few things that may need changing, colour is the main issue, but I like the design.
I like the layout of the contents page as the text and images are easy to read and see for the audience. The images have borders around them to split them from the text, which makes them stand out but also makes the text around easier to read for the audience. The headings for each page have been made a larger font size, underlined and made bold. This makes them eye catching to the audience, the audience will be attracted to the headings and encouraged to read the pages. The pages the audience will find the most interesting or the pages that the magazine wants to draw attention to have been labelled with a rugby ball. By doing this the audience's eye is drawn to that section and influenced to read the certain page. I think that the colour of the background could be improved; I am going to experiment with several colours so I can choose the best option that is most attractive to the audience. The 'issue number' and 'date of release' could also be made more attractive and vibrant.
Kiren Cottingham (Media student)
I like the background colour that has been chosen as it is effective as it makes the text and all of the images stand out and easy for the audience to view. The heading of the contents page is effective as it stands out and looks attractive. I think the use of the issue number is a waste of space as it could be displayed on the front cover and not the contents page as then the audience will want to be able to see what issue number without turning the page. Although the layout of the contents page is attractive, it is hard to follow the order in which the pages are because there is no set order.
Alex Mwanza (Media student)
I like the background of the contents page as it allows the text to stand out. This makes information for the audience easier to digest. The key image for the contents page is vibrant and attractive this is good as the audience is then influenced to look into the magazine. I like that the images have borders around each of them, I like how it makes them stand out to the audience. The headings are also made to stand out by them being bold and underlined. The rugby balls draw the audience's eye to the important pages which I admire about the magazine.
Alex Harrison (Media student)
The background blends too much to the title. The background being too dark may put a viewer off of the magazine. The boarders around the pictures are too bland, try to make them more interesting. Also there is a lack of on the magazine, not enough brings me in. I look more at the pictures than the text with this one so creating a bigger size font to make things stand out may be a good idea, as well as adding more information (To fill the blank spaces).
Good points- I like the lines between each content, and I like the header though it blends to much to the background.
The design overall is good but there is a few things that may need changing, colour is the main issue, but I like the design.
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